The Official Writing Challenge
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The opening scene drew me into the story.

One suggestion would be to make sure you put a space between paragraphs to make it easier to read. If you type your story in Word, just hit return twice between paragraphs.

I also liked the caring heart of the main character.
Hi Shellie. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry "Change Forever," actually did very well in the India Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 14th in that Level. Competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)