The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good story. I liked how you developed the characters with detailed descriptions of their experience and relationship.
02/21/09
I could feel the tension and sense of urgency in this story.

I had to chuckle when I saw "Dr. Bombay" as it reminded me of the TV show Bewitched. In India, nobody would have that name. It would be like someone being named Ohio.

Good work on this piece.
02/23/09
Let's see...blood types, A, B, AB, O. Is there a type T?
Things like that are hang-ups for me. I would like to know more.
Enjoyed your story.
Mona