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Topic: Car Trip (07/18/05)
TITLE: The Trip From Heaven
By Elisabeth Seiter
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“Can we really go Mom?” asked John excitedly.
“I would like to, but the trip is so long I’m afraid you and your sister would get
restless in the car and start fighting and annoying each other.” Mom replied.
“That doesn’t make for a very pleasant trip to hear the two of you fighting in the back
seat . Then there is always the return trip…..”
“We can take our little DVD player and watch movies and our game-boy and stuff like
“Please, please, please we’ll be good. Right Sarah?” “I promise not to fight with you .
Go ahead you promise too Sarah” John begged. “I promise” said Sarah
“Come here Sarah, John sit here by me. I want to talk to you . This is suppose to be a
vacation. Vacations are for families to spend time together, talk together and have fun
together. If you bring your game-boy and DVD, or CD player you are not sharing in the
activities the whole family can participate in, you would still be playing alone. Do you
understand what I’m trying to say?” Mom explained.
“Yeah, I get it” John said sadly “You don’t want us to have fun!”
“On the contrary. Just think for a minute at all the times you have had the most fun.
They were when you spent time with family and friends at a picnic or at the beach.
Right?” mom said. “I guess so” said John.
“I have an idea. Let’s all plan together some games we can play in the car ride down and
different games for the car ride back. If you want to spend some quiet time you can each
bring a book to read.”
“I know what I would like to do” said Sarah. “How about we each bring a CD for us to
listen to in the car. That would work for the whole family. Right mom.”
“Yes, and that means you listen to my CD’s also.” Replied mom
“Your CD’s are only Christian music, mom” said John
“That’s right. That’s the music that refreshes the soul and fills the spirit. It gives you
peace inside as well.” Mom said.
“If it gets us to the amusement park its ok with me then” John said.
The week passed quickly as John and Sarah plotted and planned the car activities.
Dad in charge of driving as always carefully highlighted the map. It was hard for Dad to
participate in some of the games because he had to concentrate on driving.
This time though Mom’s activity started the trip. “I want each of you to pray out loud
whatever it is that you feel in your heart, and we’ll keep going around 5 times. I’ll start.”
“Dear God, Bless each of us with patience and care for each others feelings
“Dear God please help Sarah not to bug me.” Prayed John
“Dear God, please help John not to tease me.” Prayed Sarah
“Dear God, please keep us safe as we travel.” Prayed Dad
Just then the cars in front of us came to a complete stop. We inched forward in line for
about ten minutes until we came to an accident with a car on fire and one turned over. It
must have just happened. Mom started praying
“Dear God, please help the ambulance to arrive quickly to help the people in the cars.”
“Dear God, please help the people to get out safely” prayed John
“Dear God, please help the fire trucks to put out the fire.” Prayed Sarah
“Dear God, please keep us safe as we travel” prayed Dad
“Dear God, please comfort those who are hurt “ said Mom
“and let them get healed quickly God, they were going on vacation too. I saw the
suitcases on top of the car.” Prayed John
“Oh God, Sarah said crying, help the little dog whose running around so he won’t get hit”
No sooner did Sarah finish her prayer when a policeman came to scoop up the dog to
“Can we keep praying” said John and Sarah. Their prayers took on new meaning when
the focus was not centered on themselves. Soon they were praying for their friends whose
father needed a job, and their uncle who had cancer, and prayer had a new meaning.
Once we arrived at the amusement park and unpacked the car we went directly to
experience the thrill of roller coasters, water slides, rock climbing walls and ice cream
cones. Thoroughly exhausted we crawled into our hotel room and fell asleep. This went
on for two days. The trip home was to be the real test of promises.
Assembled together for the trip home John was the first one to say “Mom can we
pray first before we start our games? Promise not to tell anyone? I really do feel
better inside when we pray.”
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