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02/19/09
The elephant grows weary,and the bengals stripes are fading from your constant snores.Wake up sleeping giant the cobra hisses in the night.India oh India Christ died to bring you light.

What a beautiful ending.
02/21/09
There are a lot of vivid descriptions and beautiful phrases in this piece.

Spaces between paragraphs will make it easier to read. Also, remember to proofread. Maybe having someone else do a quick grammar and spelling will help.

I also really liked the title as it fits India well.
02/26/09
Hi Dennis. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry "Sleeping Giant," actually did very well in the India Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 12th in that Level. Competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=361615

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)