The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/09
Perfect. (or as near as.)
One of the questions I like to ask myself when I read other entries is: did this writer transport me into his world? Did I feel the breeze, hear the background noises, enter into the emotions? Absolutely - this is excellent.
02/14/09
Well done--I wish you'd written even more! The addition of some dialogue, for example, to help us to get to know the characters better, would improve this already very good story.
02/14/09
Well-written. I agree with Jan's suggestions for adding dialogue.
02/20/09
Hi Karen. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry "Venezuelan River Ride," actually did very well in the South America Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 14th in Level 1. Competition in this level is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=24421

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)