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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: South America (02/05/09)

TITLE: My Heart Sings, Hallelujah!
By Lee Page
02/06/09


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Colombiaís hills,
To the clashing of seas.
From Brazilís enormous lakes.
To Peruís mighty shore.
Proves to me, that you are.
My heart sings,

Hallelujah!


The mountainís peak,
To the busy streets.
To the swaying trees,
Godís hand is there,
I cry out.

Hallelujah!


God put South America in her place.
Protects her from, the seas swift sway.
The mighty current doesnít move her out of place.
To my lord I sing.

Hallelujah!


The hurricaneís wind,
And the tornadoes spin.
To the tsunami waves.
The strong winds of the day
I am glad my lord, keeps her still.
and The lord is thrilled To hear us sayÖ

Hallelujah!


Missionaries come,
to proclaim.
Not through work,
Are we saved.
Through Christ a lone,
We are made whole
My soul sings,

Hallelujah!


Out of storms
and raging seas.
I get down on bended knee
And then I pray,
for the souls unsaved.
To my father I sing,

Hallelujah!


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Karlene Jacobsen 02/13/09
This is a beautiful poem.
Millicent Pat-Nwaoyo02/16/09
I read the peom and said to myself "this is a beautiful poem" then I went down to read other peoples comment and behold someone else had left the same comment. I love your style. Well done.
Eliza Evans 02/16/09
Well. I'm sorry but I have to use the same word.. *Beautiful* It really is.

Father in the last stanza needs to be capatalized as well as Lord throughout.

Thank you for sharing!
Jan Ackerson 02/17/09
Lovely free verse with beautiful imagery.

There were some unnecessary commas here and there that interrupted the flow somewhat.

A strong entry--thanks for sharing it.
Catrina Bradley 02/17/09
I can hear your heart sing out Hallelujah! Very uplifting tribute to the topic country.
Glynis Becker 02/18/09
I love the refrain of 'Hallelujah'! Beautiful work.
Verna Cole Mitchell 02/18/09
I sing hallelujah with your words in this inspiring poem.
Laury Hubrich 02/18/09
Very nice entry. I enjoyed reading it.