The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful poem.
I read the peom and said to myself "this is a beautiful poem" then I went down to read other peoples comment and behold someone else had left the same comment. I love your style. Well done.
02/16/09
Well. I'm sorry but I have to use the same word.. *Beautiful* It really is.

Father in the last stanza needs to be capatalized as well as Lord throughout.

Thank you for sharing!
02/17/09
Lovely free verse with beautiful imagery.

There were some unnecessary commas here and there that interrupted the flow somewhat.

A strong entry--thanks for sharing it.
02/17/09
I can hear your heart sing out Hallelujah! Very uplifting tribute to the topic country.
02/18/09
I love the refrain of 'Hallelujah'! Beautiful work.
I sing hallelujah with your words in this inspiring poem.
02/18/09
Very nice entry. I enjoyed reading it.