The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/09
Love the double meaning in the title. This is well-written and really drew me in. I felt extrememly squeamish when the narrator wrote that note!
Oh, I had a feeling Suzanne's note wouldn't fair as well as the MC's. This was a well-written story. Nice job.
02/09/09
Ouch! It's so true that our failures to be sensitive and obedient to God affects more than just us. A great illustration of that!
02/09/09
Excellent job showing how that sneaky devil can worm his way in. Good writing!
Just as the opportunity to serve arises, we may take our focus off God and focus on our circumstances. I loved the transparency of the MC and I have a feeling she's been sneaky like this before. I enjoyed the story.