The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/09
A lovely reminiscence of your honeymoon. You have a lucky bride!

A few of the rhymes seemed a little bit "forced" to me. A little bit of work on finding more natural rhymes would bump this up a notch.

I enjoyed reading this poem, very much.
This is really a beautiful way to remember the beginning of your marriage.
02/20/09
Hi Brian. I'm running a week late, but just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry "A Trip to Remember," actually did very well in the Canada Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings placing 12th in Level 1.

Competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so you did extremely well.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=24328

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)