The Official Writing Challenge
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stifled--I think you mean rifled.
I like this story very much. It was fun to read, and was probably fun for you.
02/01/09
This was a sweet little story and it was fun to get caught up in it. It possibly could have used a more dynamic ending. Be sure to watch editing rules including use of words, sentence structure and punctuation. You will just continue to get better and better!
02/05/09
Hi Kelly. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry "Class Project," actually did very well in the United Kingdom Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 15th in Level 1. Competition in this level is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=24220

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
I loved the interaction between the mother and daughter. Lovely setting for a story.