The Official Writing Challenge
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Some lovely thoughts and parallels here. Great job. I like how you showed the two distinct kingdoms.
The historical facts, the parallels between the kingdoms, and the descriptions of the disunity are all very good.
A very interesting analogy about the kingdom of God. I must say you haven't portrayed either kingdom as one to be proud of, though at least for heaven that is more the fault of the citizens than the king. I loved the end, where you showed that the church will pull together in the end.
Hi Ruth. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry "Two Kingdoms," actually did very well in the United Kingdom Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 14th in Level 1. Competition in this level is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)