The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/09
Oooh, I felt so sorry for this darling little girl. What a story!
Was it me or was the father at first harsh then suddenly gentle? What changed his attitude and decide to talk with his daughter about the UK? It seems that she was already asking the questions when he "barked" at her. Again, it could have been just me.

This has the makings of a very good story wrapped up in reconciliation and forgiveness.