The Official Writing Challenge
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Angela is an interesting character, that's for sure! I don't know if I've encountered one much like her recently.

I seem to recall the same character in last week's entry. It's not generally recommended to use recurring characters or a serial story--it defeats the "anonymous" requirement of the Challenge, especially if a judge should happen to remember your previous entries. Just something to consider.

Your have a distinct writing style, unique here. Thanks!
Interesting dialogue. It seems like the story was more about the relationship than Australia.
Maybe I'm just being finicky.
Well told story though.
This is a really sweet story, and I thought it was very well written. Great job!