The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/09
Angela is an interesting character, that's for sure! I don't know if I've encountered one much like her recently.

I seem to recall the same character in last week's entry. It's not generally recommended to use recurring characters or a serial story--it defeats the "anonymous" requirement of the Challenge, especially if a judge should happen to remember your previous entries. Just something to consider.

Your have a distinct writing style, unique here. Thanks!
01/23/09
Interesting dialogue. It seems like the story was more about the relationship than Australia.
Maybe I'm just being finicky.
Well told story though.
This is a really sweet story, and I thought it was very well written. Great job!