The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/05
I think you grasped the title aptly. Nicely written. God bless ya, littlelight
From the opening line the reader gets the impression that the man is trapped in a life that is not of his choosing. At the end he has found freedom - but the reader is left wondering just what form that freedom will take.
Perhaps the line that struck me most was about people noticing his condition but not caring enough to get involved. Even as Christians we can be guilty of this. Thank you.
I'm ready for chapter 2!!! I have also felt this man's urgency to "run away". Surely the Lord will lead him to find himself, his gifts, and his future. :-)