The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/09
A nice devotional, especially your first and last paragraphs.

The middle section is very report-like--think about what devotional lessons we could learn from those facts, perhaps?
I'd love to go there too.

This is a great listing of the where and the why. Just a suggestion if you should want to expand later: Something I like to do, is imagine myself there. How would I feel, what would I see and hear, how would I react? What would I do if I did see a kangaroo or a koala?