The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/09
I liked this a lot. Just enough of a tease to arouse the reader's curiosity about Catherine's past. Descriptive writing made this enjoyable from start to finish. Great job.
01/22/09
This is so, so beautiful!

My only suggestion would be to change the title, because it really steals from the "oomph" of the moment when Catherine reads that phrase.

I enjoyed this tremendously.
Beautiful story. You captured my heart in your description of the moment John and Catherine first met. Very good.
01/28/09
You did a really wonderful job.
Beautiful story, Excellent writing! :)
02/01/09
Good job! I enjoyed this a lot. Congratulations.