The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/09
I'd love an Australian adventure like the one you describe here!

For your readers' sake, please put an extra space between paragraphs...it's easier on the eyes.

Nice that you tied it all together with a spiritual lesson at the end.
Very interesting take on the topic. Nicely done, however it would be helpful with an extra space between paragraphs.