The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/09
I hope you never give up on your dream.

There were some errors in spelling and mechanics that might need a second edit--nothing major, but a good habit to get into.

I loved "Crocodile Dundee" too!
I enjoyed the 15-year old voice.
01/23/09
This was fun to read. Good attitude! Well done.
01/25/09
I can tell by your writing you have a real passion and voice. FaithWriters is the perfect place to put that to use, especially with the challenges. You will be amazed at how you will grow. Best of luck with your writing dream - through God all things are possible!
01/28/09
This entry provoked sadness, as I wondered if we are given dreams that may not come true, and then, what is the reason for dreams? I think this entry is about faith, too, which I felt in how the protagonist continues to live life without giving up her writing. I did have a thought about the "fluff" she's currently writing. Maybe only on the surface it can be fluff, but with some thought, creativity, and perhaps symbolism, this fluff can be turned into something more.