The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/09
I really had to grin at your 2nd and 3rd stanzas about the baby kangaroos.

Cute poem--a second edit of the meter would make it even better.

I enjoyed this entry--lots of fun.
01/25/09
I enjoyed reading your poem. It reminded me of something I might read in a children's poetry book.
04/02/09
Ha ha! Very cuyte, Verna. Kangaroos are amazing creatures. Thanks for the kind critique. Sometimes my vocabulary shrinks when I can't remember new words, and then I need a thesaurus to help! I still need to learn more words though. God bless!