The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
What a wonderful story!

You switched between "Molly" and "I" a few times, leaving me slightly disoriented. A minor fix.

You're a writer with considerable potential. Keep up the good work!
Very clever. It was touching. As I read, I was thinking about something begun on facebook. I don't remember the actual title of the group, but they refer to "random acts of kindness".
Well done.
01/15/09
If this is a true story, it is nothing short of amazing! Even if it is fictional, it is inspiring and a clever take on the topic! :)
01/16/09
This was truly great. It certainly shows the true Christian Spirit. It is more of a thrill for the giver than the recipient, when God reveals a true need.