The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Great line--"Whoever has the ice cream wins."

I enjoyed reading this a great deal--consider writing it in more of a story form, so that we can get to know the characters better.

This is a lovely entry.
01/15/09
Precious! I loved this and have already shared it with my mother (who loved it). This would make a good Reader's Digest submission.
01/17/09
Lovely message and well written.