The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Very thought provoking-- even chilling! Good job.
01/15/09
Ooooh, good one! Best I've read on this level. That ending came out of nowhere and smacked me in the face. I love it.
01/16/09
This was disturbing, clever, well-written, and hopefully NOT prophetic!!

You did a very good job with the topic, and I look forward to reading more of your work!