The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Creative and thought provoking!
01/15/09
What an interesting approach!
Very creative.

I wonder if some of the waif's dreams are a bit more mature and articulate than a child would be.

I like that you didn't specify the country, but let your readers fill that in with their own idea of where this is taking place.