The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent writing. (This is something I would expect to see in a higher level). Looking forward to reading more from you.
Very moving--you've created a great character, and you handled the flashback seamlessly.
Super entry, I look forward to seeing more from you in this level. I'm right with you!
This is a beautifully moving article. Brought tears to my eyes. Look forward to reading more from you. :)
Very moving and beautifully written. The emotions came through very strongly. Blessings,
I pretty much cried while reading this one....VERY well done! I expect to see you move up quite soon.

Beautiful job putting us into the scene. Nice work!
Great writing that put me in the moment with the MC. In my opinion, this is an advanced writing level entry. So glad you were recognized for this.