The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Excellent writing. (This is something I would expect to see in a higher level). Looking forward to reading more from you.
01/15/09
Very moving--you've created a great character, and you handled the flashback seamlessly.
Super entry, I look forward to seeing more from you in this level. I'm right with you!
This is a beautifully moving article. Brought tears to my eyes. Look forward to reading more from you. :)
Very moving and beautifully written. The emotions came through very strongly. Blessings,
Norms
01/22/09
I pretty much cried while reading this one....VERY well done! I expect to see you move up quite soon.

Beautiful job putting us into the scene. Nice work!
01/23/09
Great writing that put me in the moment with the MC. In my opinion, this is an advanced writing level entry. So glad you were recognized for this.