The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Your passion comes across loud and clear!

I wasn't always sure what your main point was, though. Maybe if this were expanded and organized into paragraphs it'd flow more smoothly.

I DID get your love and concern for your country, though. Thanks for this entry, and keep writing!
01/16/09
Good thoughts here. Well done.