The Official Writing Challenge
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That is a very cute story. Preschoolers are so wonderful. My daughter is in Kindergarten now. I love to hear how they try to fit Santa in the story. I mean Santa is not evil. It was meant to be the spirit of giving and love. The world has twisted him into the focus. Good luck in conveying the truth to them. So many things competing. These kids are priveleged to have a Christian school and teacher. This is a well written story. Good luck and Merry Christmas.
12/16/08
LOL!!! I enjoyed this very much. Great title, and great telling of the story. My only critique - I felt it dropped off a little abruptly at the end. Overall, tho, good job!!
This was really pretty good. I love how little children tell things the way they see it. It's so pure and honest.