The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like this story. It kept my attention and was very descriptive yet you seemed to know when to put the brakes on and move forward.

I like the last 2 sentences for we may have daily heros but Jesus will always be our full time champion, 24/7.

Thank the Lord for hubby's who know how to walk in the authority Jesus has given them. Makes all the difference in the world.

Continue on with your wonderful gift of writing. You will definintely bless many for sure.
01/31/05
Great writing! I enjoyed your story.
02/01/05
Great fast moving piece. The dialog worked well. Good job!
02/01/05
Great truths. This is more than a beginner level article. Keep writing.
02/01/05
Very smooth even writing..
My humble opinion...you need to step up...you my dear are no beginner.
Thank you for sharing
Yeshua bless.
02/02/05
This was a GREAT story. I loved how you used a life story and then its correlation to the spiritual. You are absolutely right on how to defeat the devil. If I could vote you a "winner" you'd have my first place vote. Keep up the great work!
02/02/05
I have to agree. This is not beginner material. Excellent read. VERY well done!
Very powerful message in your story at the end. Good job. After reading this, I think you need to move up a level. God bless you.
What a great story! I loved every line. You write clearly and vividly. A gentle answer turns away wrath. Great message.
02/06/05
Great application and well written.
02/07/05
Kathy, I know you'll be delighted to see that you were Highly Commended in the Level 1 Champion Challenge awards. I just did an add up and saw that there were about 62 entries in this Level, so to get a Highly Commended is really a credit to you. Well done! Keep rising to the Challenge (and staying as cool as a cucumber!) Love, Deb (Challenge Co-ordinator)