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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: The Reason for the Season of Christmas (12/04/08)

TITLE: For this Christ came
By vaughn ohlman
12/05/08


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>>1Co 15:45 And so it is written, The first man Adam was made a living soul; the last Adam was made a quickening spirit.<<

I hadn’t seen her in a while, and wanted to. I knew that before she had been working on those flowering plants down in the south. She loved the flowering plants best. I loved the tall plants with the large fruits.
I heard her before I saw her. She was talking with someone, probably one of the animals; altho it could be one of the angels or God himself. Where was she? What was she doing over there, of all places?

I came around the corner and stopped suddenly. There she was, standing at the foot of the tree! She turned toward me and I saw, in her hand…
She had done it. She had done what He said we might not do.

It could be done.

We didn’t have to follow His laws. We could act on our own.

I moved toward her…

>>1Co 15:21-22 For since by man came death, by man came also the resurrection of the dead. For as in Adam all die, even so in Christ shall all be made alive.
John 6:51 I am the living bread which came down from heaven: if any man eat of this bread, he shall live for ever: and the bread that I will give is my flesh, which I will give for the life of the world.<<


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Valarie Sullivan12/11/08
Wow! Now that was a different take! Food for thought!
Stacey LaMontagne12/12/08
I don't get it. I am sorry. I think there should be more to this. It is very cryptic and not spaced well. Did she kill an animal? Was this a sacrifice and what does this have to do with Christmas? I think you had the right idea to be different, just needs a little more work. God Bless You and Merry Christmas!
Nancy Ringkamp12/14/08
If I am reading this correctly, this is Eve in the garden of Eden at the tree of knowledge that God had specifically asked Adam and Eve not to eat from. I believe it is a very good concept, just needs a little fine tuning. This is definately why Jesus came to earth and in the beginning was the Word....it is an unique take on it. I do agree to watch the spacing to make it easier to read. Thank you for writing it; it is food for thought and for deeper thinking.