The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Now that was a different take! Food for thought!
I don't get it. I am sorry. I think there should be more to this. It is very cryptic and not spaced well. Did she kill an animal? Was this a sacrifice and what does this have to do with Christmas? I think you had the right idea to be different, just needs a little more work. God Bless You and Merry Christmas!
If I am reading this correctly, this is Eve in the garden of Eden at the tree of knowledge that God had specifically asked Adam and Eve not to eat from. I believe it is a very good concept, just needs a little fine tuning. This is definately why Jesus came to earth and in the beginning was the Word....it is an unique take on it. I do agree to watch the spacing to make it easier to read. Thank you for writing it; it is food for thought and for deeper thinking.