The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/08
I love reading stories that give me a glimpse into other countries.

One of the pitfalls of writing nonfiction is that you have knowledge that your readers lack--I had to backtrack a few times to figure out the characters and their relationships.

I like your title, and your last paragraph.
12/12/08
Hi William. I just wanted to let you know that you did very well in the Challenge this week. Even though you didn't quite make it into the winners' circle, you made it into the highest rankings for Level 1, placing 10th for the level.

The competition is always quite intense in Level 1, so well done. Keep up the great writing.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=23381

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)