The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/08
Hee, hee...this is so funny! I love it! You did a great job showing personalities with your dialogue. Well written.
12/01/08
Funny! Your MC's character is believable, and the mis-communication dialog is a hoot. The phone bit was a little hard for me to follow, and the pace is rushed - maybe from bumping against the word limit? I like the ending, however - very clever. I really enjoyed this well written story.
12/04/08
Congratulations on your 1st place, Sonya. This is very funny, and very good dialogue. Way to go!
12/04/08
Good story, very funny with a good ending. Well written.
12/04/08
Congratulations, Sonya. When I read this the first time, I knew it would place well.
You're on your way up!
12/04/08
Congratulations on your excellent win, Sonya. As well as your 1st Place win in Level 1, you also made it into the Top 40 overall, ranking 20th out of all the entries. Well done! That's an excellent achievement.

Time to move up to Level 2 now.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=23289

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
What a fun story! I'm glad I took time to read some winning entries I missed last week. Congratulations!