The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
Very good story, although it was mentioned to John about Hope's way of placing stickers on people. The conclusion was very rushed. Enjoyed it though.
07/18/05
**Correction** it wasn't mentioned to John
07/18/05
(he-he) I think it is suppossed to remain annonymous. Very good suspense, and came to wonderful conclusion.
God bless ya, littlelight
07/20/05
Yeah, I can see much missing here, I have the same problem. The ending probably is not as contrived in the expanded essay. Work on it and post it in FW Article critique group.
07/20/05
A very well written story -and a very smart little girl!
Good story, a little much on the dialogue for me (but that's just me, eh?) Thanks for sharing!