The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
Very nice, although I personally as a reader thought the process of the sentence structure was stretched out was a bit too much. Beautiful words and discriptions however. God bless ya, littlelight
07/20/05
While there are some minor element improvements that could be made on this free form poetry, I (peronally) would rank this as one of the best of the year. Thank you
07/20/05
A very nice poem - good images.
Not exactly my favourite style of poetry, but great imagery nonetheless. Thanks for sharing.
07/22/05
This is a great effort for a beginner. Lovely images paint a clear and engaging picture. Getting away from it all is a great way to regain perpective, well done.
07/22/05
I actually thought this was brilliant. Loved the imagery, loved the style. The message was spot on and I had no trouble with the flow. I love sentimental prose, but am not a huge free-style poetry fan. But I have to say, I loved this. Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
07/23/05
Poetry is, well, greek to me! So no comments on the poetry aspect, but loved the descriptions.
07/25/05
Loved this line with the alliteration - "Sun swept silky skies". Beautiful descriptions. Well done!