The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/08
The change in attitude is portrayed quite well here. I can't imagine having come back from war to this kind of attitude. Nice ending.
Good picture of the 'climate change' between the outside world and home. So sad that vets were treated this way.
Little nitpicky thing: be careful to capitalize names.
Your MC was very believable and authentic.