The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/08
The change in attitude is portrayed quite well here. I can't imagine having come back from war to this kind of attitude. Nice ending.
12/03/08
Good picture of the 'climate change' between the outside world and home. So sad that vets were treated this way.
Little nitpicky thing: be careful to capitalize names.
Your MC was very believable and authentic.