The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/08
What a lovely Christmas! Was very curious what the kids were whispering about, and I love how shocked the mom was. Nice.
Oh, this is good. Kept my curiosity up at the beginning. Got it, that Dillon was coming home, half way through. . . but still was looking forward to Mom's reaction. :)
12/04/08
Great job! I guessed the ending as soon as the mom mentioned Dillon....maybe build it more up as a surprise for the reader as well. It's a very well-written piece - I like the variety of words. :)
12/04/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended award, Valarie. As well as placing 4th in Level 1, you also made it into the Top 40 overall, ranking 36th out of all the entries. Well done!

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=23289

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)