The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good characterization, and an extremely engaging tale. I found the tie-in to the topic pretty scant, but was definitely engrossed in this. Nicely done!
It could be my tired eyes, but it was a little difficult for me to follow, but I did enjoy it.
Excellent writing, but I think its off topic.
I was confused as to just what they were doing. What were they looking for?
Very intense, emotionally! You could feel the desperation.