The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/08
You have some very nice turns of phrase here.

It will be easier on your readers' eyes if you hit an extra "enter" between each paragraph.

I definitely look forward to reading more of your entries in the future.
11/27/08
Sharon, I just wanted to let you know that you did very well in the Challenge this week. Even though you didn't quite make it into the winners' circle, you made it into the highest rankings for Level 1, placing 8th for the level.

The competition is always quite intense in Level 1, so well done. Keep up the great writing.

If you would like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can see them here:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=343147

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)