The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an excellent devotion and I love Jennifer's story. I believe though that it might have been more effective if you hadn't changed the train of thought to current events, just tied the story in with the Bible verse. But good writing!
Jennifer's memory of
Christmas cards was very interesting, and could be expanded to make a lovely story all by itself.

I didn't understand why you used the (s), especially in dialogue. If she said "cards", then a simple s by itself to make the plural would suffice.

Your title is a great hook--very intriguing.