The Official Writing Challenge
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This is certainly full of excitement and adventure, and you have a way with words.

It's well-titled, though--because I didn't entirely understand all of it. Parts of it seemed very unlikely to me.

I'd really like to know more about all of these characters, particularly the bride and the groom.
I almost see a connection between the world (the bride, who has a horrible past) and the groom (perhaps Christ waiting to receive His bride). I know it doesn't quite work out given the groom's description, but it was neat trying to figure out what this meant. I think it is a challenge to try to develop characters within our word count limit, but it is fun.