The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/08
This is certainly full of excitement and adventure, and you have a way with words.

It's well-titled, though--because I didn't entirely understand all of it. Parts of it seemed very unlikely to me.

I'd really like to know more about all of these characters, particularly the bride and the groom.
11/23/08
I almost see a connection between the world (the bride, who has a horrible past) and the groom (perhaps Christ waiting to receive His bride). I know it doesn't quite work out given the groom's description, but it was neat trying to figure out what this meant. I think it is a challenge to try to develop characters within our word count limit, but it is fun.