The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/08
This is good. What I like is that you have a clear message to convey. A few typos and grammar points but that'll come in time. Keep writing and may you be a blessing in your creativity to others
11/18/08
Nice title, sparked my interest. Well written story with a great point that built as I read. The ending seemed a bit rushed, nice to have it all wrap up but maybe something a bit more personal (just a thought). Overall great entry though.