The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/08
You've created quite an interesting MC. I haven't read any other entries yet from the card's POV.

Although your first sentence tells the reader exactly who is speaking, I was still a bit confused. Having multiple inanimate objects with personalities is difficult to pull off.

Very creative take on the topic. I liked your card's teenage personality.