The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/05
You really did have me LOL. Great! My Brownie troop wasn't nearly as much fun -our leader's idea of a hike was the railroad tracks back of the church where we met!
07/19/05
I used to believe in brownies (LOL) Sorry you guys had to rough it! Interesting story. God bless ya, littlelight
07/20/05
Delightful. Thanks.
07/21/05
Hehe what a cute article. I still won't use a latrine and I'm 21... all the power to ya! Thanks for sharing!
07/22/05
This was adorable. You share a fun and memorable event, and add humor too (the title captured my attention right away)! My advice would be to work a little on the structure and maybe expand on a couple points. A great effort!

P.S. Years ago, Troop Beverly Hills was one of my favorite movies. Shelly Long is great! Thanks for the memory.
07/22/05
Cute story! I was a little confused at the switches back and forth between the adult and the child, but very entertaining!