The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/08
Okay, if I had a choice in the matter you would be the winner. You spoke of cards in a way I believe no one expected. I felt as if I was reading Deanne Gist or even the infamous Lori Wick. Excellent. You deserve to be in a much higher level than Beginner. God Speed to getting published.
11/15/08
I liked your theme. It was odd but kept me reading. I liked that your gamblers were willing to take a "gamble" in a whole new way. Good job.
Nicely written, easy to follow. And cute, to boot! Keep writing. I like this story and would like to read more from you. Keep Writing!