The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/08
A touching memoir of a percious time in your family history. Than you for sharing it.
You might think about the beginning - it was a little unclear and took me a couple of paragraphs to work out.
Well done.
11/12/08
Wow! What a treat! I've never ridden in a limo. I'm sure the family will remember that their whole life.