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11/06/08
This was certainly an emotional trip. Having three daughters, I lived it as I read it. You had me until the very end. Good job.
11/07/08
Very tense! I wondered what had happened to Jenny. She sounded a lovely girl.
11/13/08
Wow. The hairs are my arms and neck are still up as I write. Excellent use of foreshadowing from beginning to end...and what an end! I am glad that you spared us those heart-breaking details, showing us instead the heart of a Father who comforted both child and family with the same angel. Well done!