The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/08
You've got some great descripive talent here. Break it up into smaller paragraphs and your reader will stay with you and enjoy the journey. Good word usage!
11/09/08
Beautifully told reminiscent memory of a wonderful family Christmas! I so enjoy the privilege of getting a peek into someone's life like this.