The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
"Oh how I wish I could come up with a beautiful title like you did! I would have liked to hear more about God's artwork though. Maybe you can add to this and submitt it to the critique circle?
07/19/05
A nice start -would love to see some of the things you saw on your trips :)
07/19/05
I know Maggie Valley, It is beautiful area. Well, I'm a little thirsty for a little more information on your camping experience. A little more detail. Keep writing! God bless ya, littlelight
07/21/05
Great title, cool statement...now for the rest of the story.
A little too short for my liking, maybe you could have added a little bit of a memory of what it was like camping. Thanks for sharing.