The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice touch--to have the lights in th sky be post-Christmas lights!

A few word errors that might be just typos--heave/heavy...plumb/plump...coco/cocoa. A quick once-over before you submit might catch those.

How lovely--the different was God finds to speak to His children!
It's always a blessing to see God "showing up" like that; parting the clouds and revealing the stars, post-Christmas lights, just for her.

You definitely brought me into the story. I felt as if I were witness to her moment of joy, with God. Nice job