The Official Writing Challenge
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I had to finally give this lonely story a comment! It is very cute. It doesn't have any conflict, but otherwise not badly written.
I think this is so sweet. Of course you have grown tons since that first entry a half of a decade ago. Even then, however, you had great insight into that complicated show don't tell concept. I hope you never stop writing because your words had a wonderful affect on my ornery heart. :-)