The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
I had to read this story first -the title had me very curious! A few typos that need fixed, but other than a very cute story!!
07/18/05
This was a fun and sweet article. Liked the ending. (a few typos) God bless ya, littlelight
07/21/05
Delightful tale, work on dialog techniques and clean up the typos and you have a piece worthy of publication. Thanks.
Very fun! Needs a little editing, but that's no biggie. Thanks for sharing!