The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/08
Ohh, this is so good! I love hhow you depicted the Christmas countdown from a different view. Check out, I Give MY Beloved Son, also in beginners,just below your entry, it's similiar to this writing I see after reading these.
I enjoyed your character and the way you described Gabriel and such humaness of the Baby Jesus, born to save our world. I really enjoyed this piece. God bless your writing!!
11/03/08
I love your creative take on the topic. This is well written. Great Job!
11/03/08
Creative and well-written.
11/03/08
I loved this! The story of that very special night when our Savior was born is told beautifully. Your title is well chosen.
11/04/08
Lovely way of bringing the story across. Loved the way you did it.
Well done.
Norms
11/04/08
Creative slant on the topic. Relayed the message clearly. Nice job. :)
11/05/08
Love your POV. You have talent worth developing.

Also, your format was a good addition to how the story flowed.
11/05/08
I love your perspective and dialogue. A little more description here and there will set up the mood and setting. You're improving!
11/05/08
"Could there ever be a more perfect love?" I like the way you told this story from a different viewpoint.
11/06/08
Creative take on the topic! You have an excellent way of communicating your message. As far as the writing goes, I would like to be able to "see" the scene a little more clearly; try putting the reader right into the story with descriptive language. Nice work!