The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/08
Brooding, poignant writing. It's a delight to find writing of this standard in Beginners. And thanks for showing another side to Christmas. The God who puts joy in our hearts is the same God who calls us to mourn with those who mourn.
11/03/08
Wow. This is fantastic writing, flows well with great suspense and a good ending. The title drew me in.
Beautifully written. I felt the emotions you expressed throughout the piece. Well done.
11/06/08
You captured my attention from the title onward. Great portrail of the raw emotions of losing your spouse and tying it in with what the Father must have felt. Excellent job!